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Subject: Re: [pbd-se] Request for review comments and edits on PbD-SE Working Draft 04 by Friday June 13th
Hi Frank: It is not a hard and fast fixed time - rather a hoped-for one. For example, Sander had indicated that he intends to do comments and suggested edits for section 4 this weekend, and we're hoping to also get Stuart's edits by Monday. Could you do detailed Comments and edits for Section 3 and share them as a first task? If you can find time, also section 4? We are working through your previous feedback in the meantime. Could we also ask your visual modelling expert colleague who recently joined the TC to do a review of section 5 in the next few days ? We'll address the common voice eventually. Many thanks, Dawn Sent from my iPhone
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