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Subject: RE: SPML draft 15 - remarks
Thanks again Rami. The things you identify have been changed in a final draft located at [1]. In accordance with last week's committee review and vote, this new version will be carried forward as our committee specification. Some minor changes will be required, to be precise, the following: - Change doc identifiers - Add voting members names to appendices - Remove change notification in document - Produce PDF version After these changes, TC process requires that I send out the OASIS IPR Policy and I need to collect notification from at least three members have consistently used the draft specification in accordance with OASIS IPR Policy. I'll do both of these in follow-up mails. [1] http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/2369/draft-pstc-spml-c ore-16.doc ========================================================= Darran Rolls http://www.waveset.com Waveset Technologies Inc drolls@waveset.com ========================================================= > -----Original Message----- > From: Elron, Rami [mailto:rami_elron@bmc.com] > Sent: Sunday, June 01, 2003 12:02 PM > To: Darran Rolls; provision@lists.oasis-open.org > Subject: SPML draft 15 - remarks > > Hi Darran, > > Several remarks with regard to the current draft: > > 1. Page 24, line 574 (example): "<identifier providerIDType..." should be > "<providerIdentifier providerIDType...>" > 2. Page 24, line 588 (example): "<identifier providerIDType..." should be > "<providerIdentifier providerIDType...>" > 3. Page 51, lines 1050-1053 should be revised. The <providerIdentifier> > element IS mandatory. > 4. Page 73 should contain a reference to the SPML Roadmap document. > > Best regards, > > Rami. > > > ----------------------------------------------------------------- > Rami Elron > Senior System Architect > Security Business Unit > BMC Software Ltd. > > Tel: 972 3 766 2434 > Fax: 972 3 645 1100 > Mobile: 972 64 286 434 > email: rami_elron@bmc.com >
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