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Subject: Re: [provision] Comments on draft 8...
Bohren, Jeffrey wrote: > 2.1.3.1 – I would like to change the title from “Schema” to > “Provisioning Schema”. Also everywhere we talk about the schema for a > target, we should use the term “Target Provisioning Schema” or > “Provisioning Schema” as appropriate. This will help alleviate the > problem that the term schema is used for so many purposes. > I'll track this as spec issue #33. I'll reply in a separate email to discuss. > 2.1.3.3. – The title should be “Capabilities”. > Done (spec issue #34). > 3.1.3 – There seem to be two blank images in this section (at least in > my copy). > In MSWORD, from the "View" menu select "Print Layout". > 3.1.3.1 –Error in title, should be “Execution Mode Attribute” > #36. Gee, "error" seems a little strong. After all, the attribute in question *is* named "executionMode". Do you still think that we should change the title? > > 3.1.3.2 – We should spell out “asynchronous” except when refering to > an XML element or attribute > #37. I thought I did spell out "asynchronous" everwhere except "Async Capability" (which I believe is the formal name of the capability). What else did you notice? > 3.2.3 – *Caution: PSOIdentifier is mutable *should be: *Caution: PSO > Identifier is mutable* and *Recommend immutable PSOIdentifier* should > be *Recommend immutable PSO Identifier.* > Done (#38).
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