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Subject: Re: [relax-ng] Compact Syntax Tutorial available
Mike Fitzgerald wrote: > Section 1. > current: "The DTD would be as follows:" > suggest: "The DTD (an internal subset) would be as follows:" OK, but I prefer "(as an internal subset)". > also suggest: You mention # at the end of the section. You could incorporate > # into at least one of the samples in sec. 1. I think I'll just add another example with some comments. > Section 4. > current: "However, recursive references must be within an element." > suggest: "However, recursive references must be within an element > definition." OK, but should be "element pattern" rather than "element definition". > Section 6. > current: "normalization automatically performed by XML" > suggest: "normalization automatically performed by an XML processor" OK. > Section 15. > current: "This would match a XML document such as:" > suggest: "This would match a document such as:" OK. > A. > suggest: You could list the keywords in list rather than a block. OK. > B. > current: "Also RELAX NG does not define a way for an XML document to > associate itself with a RELAX NG pattern." > suggest: "Also RELAX NG does not define a way for an XML document to > associate itself with a RELAX NG pattern as a document type declaration does > with a DTD." How about: Also, whereas an XML document can associate itself with a DTD using a DOCTYPE declaration, RELAX NG does not define a way for an XML document to associate itself with a RELAX NG pattern. James
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