[rights-requirements] Suggested wording for paragraph

[Lisa Rein <lisarein@finetuning.com>]

Hi Hari,

Thomas, Aaron and I have come up with the following wording for the 
paragraphs in question:

Our final suggested wording:

While the language that is standardized by this committee may be
expressive enough to express policy associated with the subject areas
listed above, it is important to note that ensuring this is outside the 
scope of this TC. The work product of this technical committee will be 
one component of a larger ecosystem, and other components and workflows 
will address those issues not addressed by this technical committee.


Original language:

(3) While the language that is standardized by this committee may be 
expressive enough to express policy associated with the aforementioned 
areas within the appropriate contexts of the problem addressed, the 
scope of this committee is not to solve the bigger problem. The work 
product of this technical committee will be one component of a larger 
ecosystem of componentry and workflows that will address those issues 
that are not addressed by this technical committee itself.

thanks!

lisa