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Subject: Re: [sca-bindings] [Issue 2] Inlined proposal v5
- From: Mike Edwards <mike_edwards@uk.ibm.com>
- To: OASIS Bindings <sca-bindings@lists.oasis-open.org>
- Date: Thu, 18 Jun 2009 11:24:18 +0100
Folks,
First, thanks for Anish for preparing
a thorough revision of the proposal.
Comments:
1) [BWS50005] mentions [BWS50003] but
BWS50003 no longer exists. I believe that [BWS50002] should be referenced
instead.
2) It is surprising that the "SCA
Web Services Callback with WS-MakeConnection Protocol" section has
no normative statements
I feel that the 2nd paragraph could
well have "MUST adhere to" instead of "has to adhere to".
The 5th paragraph also sounds normative,
and "the callback request message
is sent as the response" could
well be rendered
as "the
callback request message MUST be sent as the response".
3) The normative statements in Assertion
Attachment section read somewhat clumsily and in some ways miss the real
point, which is
contained in the last paragraph. I
wonder if some rewording might make things clearer and more straightforward,
such as:
"Policy Subjects allowed for a
WSCallback policy assertion and which can have WSCallback policy assertions
attached
MUST be contained within the scope of
the following set of WSDL 1.1 elements:
• wsdl:port
• wsdl:binding"
[BWS500xx]
Editorial comments:
a) The references to examples in Appendix
E should have hyperlinks in the text.
b) I'd be happier with references to
other specs combining the name of the document and the short form reference
tag, such
as [WS-Addr].
Yours, Mike.
Strategist - Emerging Technologies, SCA & SDO.
Co Chair OASIS SCA Assembly TC.
IBM Hursley Park, Mail Point 146, Winchester, SO21 2JN, Great Britain.
Phone & FAX: +44-1962-818014 Mobile: +44-7802-467431
Email: mike_edwards@uk.ibm.com
From:
| Anish Karmarkar <Anish.Karmarkar@oracle.com>
|
To:
| OASIS Bindings <sca-bindings@lists.oasis-open.org>
|
Date:
| 18/06/2009 09:41
|
Subject:
| [sca-bindings] [Issue 2] Inlined proposal
v5 |
Attached.
This proposal consists of taking the inlined proposal v4 produced by
MikeE [1] and applying it to CD02 rev4. On top of that I have made the
following changes (based on the last call where we discussed v4):
1) Included a pointer to the appendix examples from section 5.2
2) Missing 2119 statement tags are added.
3) Fixed cross-references and 2119 stmt highlighing.
4) Deleted all the MAY statements that were unnecessary.
5) Replaced lowercase 2119 keywords with appropriate non-keyword substitutes
6) Made the protocol composable with WS-MC without introducing
additional conformance points.
-Anish
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