Hi Simon,
See inline. Just WS-MC needs to be fixed.
Thanks!
Mary
On Jul 28, 2009, at 11:00 AM, Simon Holdsworth wrote: Mary, OK, I've gone through the three specs, I need some help though if possible and a double check before I send you the updated files. For the JMS binding spec, I now have: [RFC2119] S. Bradner, Key words for use in RFCs to Indicate Requirement Levels, http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt, IETF RFC 2119, March 1997. [JMS] Java™ Message Service Specification v1.1 http://java.sun.com/products/jms/ [WSDL] E. Christensen et al, Web Service Description Language (WSDL) 1.1, http://www.w3.org/TR/2001/NOTE-wsdl-20010315, W3C Note, March 15 2001. R. Chinnici et al, Web Service Description Language (WSDL) Version 2.0 Part 1: Core Language, http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-wsdl20-20070626/, W3C Recommendation, June 26 2007. [JCA15] J2EE Connector Architecture Specification Version 1.5 http://java.sun.com/j2ee/connector/ [IETFJMS] M. Phillips, P. Easton, D. Rokicki, E. Johnson, URI Scheme for Java™ Message Service 1.0 http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-merrick-jms-uri-06.txt, IETF Internet-Draft June 2009 Note that this URI scheme is currently in draft. The reference for this specification will be updated when the IETF standard is finalized [SCA-Assembly] OASIS Committee Draft 03, “Service Component Architecture Assembly Model Specification Version 1.1”, March 2009 http://docs.oasis-open.org/opencsa/sca-assembly/sca-assembly-1.1-spec-cd03.pdf [SCA-Policy] OASIS Committee Draft 02, “SCA Policy Framework Specification Version 1.1”, February 2009 http://docs.oasis-open.org/opencsa/sca-policy/sca-policy-1.1-spec-cd02.pdf I think most of these are OK, however I can't find a citation format for Java specifications, and I also can't find a direct URL to download a specific JMS or JCA spec version, at least I can't find one without accepting the license agreement, which I am not permitted to do.
Yes; that's fine. For JCA I have the same issue with respect to referencing the JCA 1.5 spec.
Understood. For WS I've done the best I can: [RFC2119] S. Bradner, Key words for use in RFCs to Indicate Requirement Levels, http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt, IETF RFC 2119, March 1997. [SCA-Assembly] OASIS Committee Draft 03, “Service Component Architecture Assembly Model Specification Version 1.1”, March 2009 http://docs.oasis-open.org/opencsa/sca-assembly/sca-assembly-1.1-spec-cd03.pdf [SCA-Policy] OASIS Committee Draft 02, “SCA Policy Framework Specification Version 1.1”, February 2009 http://docs.oasis-open.org/opencsa/sca-policy/sca-policy-1.1-spec-cd02.pdf [SCA-JCAA] OASIS Committee Draft 03, “SCA Java Common Annotations and APIs Specification Version 1.1”, May 2009 http://docs.oasis-open.org/opencsa/sca-j/sca-javacaa-1.1-spec-cd03.pdf [WSDL11] E. Christensen et al, Web Service Description Language (WSDL) 1.1, http://www.w3.org/TR/2001/NOTE-wsdl-20010315, W3C Note, March 15 2001. [WSDL20] Chinnici et al, Web Service Description Language (WSDL) Version 2.0 Part 1: Core Language, http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-wsdl20-20070626/, W3C Recommendation, June 26 2007. [WSI-Profiles] “Basic Profile Version 1.1” http://www.ws-i.org/Profiles/BasicProfile-1.1.html, “Attachments Profile Version 1.0” http://www.ws-i.org/Profiles/AttachmentsProfile-1.0.html, “Simple SOAP Binding Profile Version 1.0” http://www.ws-i.org/Profiles/SimpleSoapBindingProfile-1.0.html, “Basic Security Profile Version 1.0” http://www.ws-i.org/Profiles/BasicSecurityProfile-1.0.html [JAX-WS] “JSR 224: JavaTM API for XML-Based Web Services (JAX-WS) 2.0” http://jcp.org/en/jsr/detail?id=224 [SOAP11] Box et al, “Simple Object Access Protocol (SOAP) 1.1” http://www.w3.org/TR/2000/NOTE-SOAP-20000508/, W3C Note May 2000 [SOAP] Gudgin et al, “SOAP Version 1.2 Part 1: Messaging Framework” http://www.w3.org/TR/2003/REC-soap12-part1-20030624/, W3C Recommendation June 2003; Box et al, “Simple Object Access Protocol (SOAP) 1.1” http://www.w3.org/TR/2000/NOTE-SOAP-20000508/, W3C Note May 2000 [SOAP12Adjuncts] Gudgin et al, “SOAP Version 1.2 Part 2: Adjuncts (Second Edition)” http://www.w3.org/TR/soap12-part2/, W3C Recommendation April 2007 [WS-Addr] Gudgin et al, “Web Services Addressing 1.0 – Core” http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/REC-ws-addr-core-20060509/, W3C Recommendation May 2006 [W11-SOAP12] Angelov et al, “WSDL 1.1 Binding Extension for SOAP 1.2” http://www.w3.org/Submission/wsdl11soap12/, W3C Member Submission April 2006 [WS-Addr-SOAP] Gudgin et al, “Web Services Addressing 1.0 – SOAP Binding” http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/REC-ws-addr-soap-20060509/, W3C Recommentation May 2006 [WS-MC] http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-rx/wsmc/200702/wsmc-1.1-spec-os.html
This one needs to be fixed. [WS-Policy] Vedamuthu et al, “Web Services Policy 1.5 – Framework” http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-20070904, W3C Recommendation September 2007 [WS-PA] Vedamuthu et al, “Web Services Policy 1.5 – Attachment” http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/REC-ws-policy-attach-20070904, W3C Recommendation September 2007 Regards, Simon
Simon Holdsworth STSM, SCA Bindings Architect; Master Inventor; OASIS SCA Bindings TC Chair MP 211, IBM UK Labs, Hursley Park, Winchester SO21 2JN, UK Tel +44-1962-815059 (Internal 245059) Fax +44-1962-816898 Internet - Simon_Holdsworth@uk.ibm.com Hi Simon, Just a couple of things that need to be tweaked. 1. Date format: DD Month YYYY. No 'th' or comma. On both title page and running footer. 2. References to specifications. You have the following[SCA-Assembly] http://docs.oasis-open.org/opencsa/sca-assembly/sca-assembly-1.1-spec.html [SCA-Policy] http://docs.oasis-open.org/opencsa/sca-policy/sca-policy-1.1-spec.pdf [SCA-JCAA] http://docs.oasis-open.org/opencsa/sca-j/sca-javacaa-1.1-spec.pdf [WS-Security] http://docs.oasis-open.org/wss/v1.1/wss-v1.1-spec-os-SOAPMessageSecurity.pdf [WS-MC] http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-rx/wsmc/200702/wsmc-1.1-spec-os.html These are incomplete at best and do not point to specific versions of a work product. The following is the required format for citations to OASIS work products. OASIS Stage (Committee Draft 01, Committee Draft 02, Committee Specifcation 01, etc. or Standard) Title (italicized or in quotation marks) Approval Date (Month YYYY) URI of the actual Authoritative Specification (namespace is not acceptable as the content changes over time) For example: [EDXL-HAVE] OASIS Standard, "Emergency Data Exchange Language (EDXL) Hospital AVailability Exchange (HAVE) Version 1.0", November 2008. http://docs.oasis-open.org/emergency/edxl-have/os/emergency_edxl_have-1.0-spec-os.doc You do the same for many other specifications as well. Please use proper citation format as recommended by the each of the organizations cited.
Regards, Mary On Jul 20, 2009, at 12:16 PM, Simon Holdsworth wrote:
Mary, My original request (note I got two of the interested parties mixed up originally): http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/sca-bindings/200907/msg00043.html Updated: http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/sca-bindings/200907/msg00046.html The meeting minutes for the public review vote: http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/33121/SCA%20Bindings%20minutes%202009-06-25 Regards, Simon Simon Holdsworth STSM, SCA Bindings Architect; Master Inventor; OASIS SCA Bindings TC Chair MP 211, IBM UK Labs, Hursley Park, Winchester SO21 2JN, UK Tel +44-1962-815059 (Internal 245059) Fax +44-1962-816898 Internet - Simon_Holdsworth@uk.ibm.com
Hi Simon, I never saw the message below - when did you send it? (header info wasn't included in the forward) - I'm occasionally missing messages and trying to troubleshoot if I have an overactive filter set somewhere ... I have it now - the one piece that seems to be missing from the request is a link to the meeting minutes where the TC voted to submit the specifications for public review. Regards, Mary On Jul 20, 2009, at 6:43 AM, Simon Holdsworth wrote: Mary, I would appreciate it if you could confirm that you've received this request and provide a target date for publication and commencement of the public review for the three SCA bindings specifications. Please let me know if there is anything additional I need to do to help this along. Regards, Simon Simon Holdsworth STSM, SCA Bindings Architect; Master Inventor; OASIS SCA Bindings TC Chair MP 211, IBM UK Labs, Hursley Park, Winchester SO21 2JN, UK Tel +44-1962-815059 (Internal 245059) Fax +44-1962-816898 Internet - Simon_Holdsworth@uk.ibm.com __________________ Mary, The SCA Bindings TC have voted to publish cd03 of the three bindings specifications. The cd03 packages are as follows: http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/33356/sca-jcabinding-1.1-spec-cd03.zip http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/33355/sca-jmsbinding-1.1-spec-cd03.zip http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/33354/sca-wsbinding-1.1-spec-cd03.zip The TC has also resolved to proceed to public view for 60 days for these committee drafts. The following interested parties were identified by the TC: For JCA binding: JCP (spec lead for JCA) mailing list: j2ee-connector-comments@sun.com or jsr-112-comments@jcp.org although it looks like there has been no activity on this for a couple of years. For JMS binding: JCP (spec lead for JMS); I can't find any email for this, and again it is some time since there was any activity here. IETF (JMS URI) I can't find an official mailing list for this, the editors on the relevant specification are m8philli@uk.ibm.com, peaston@progress.com, derek.rokicki@softwareag.com, eric@tibco.com For WS binding: W3C (web services activity mailing list) mailing list: www-ws@w3.org or www-ws-arch@w3.org I'd appreciate it if you could start this process, or let me know what else I need to do to make this happen. Thanks, Simon Simon Holdsworth STSM, SCA Bindings Architect; Master Inventor; OASIS SCA Bindings TC Chair MP 211, IBM UK Labs, Hursley Park, Winchester SO21 2JN, UK Tel +44-1962-815059 (Internal 245059) Fax +44-1962-816898 Internet - Simon_Holdsworth@uk.ibm.com
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