Re: [sca-j] [ISSUE 106] RFC2119 Language is needed for Spring C&ISpecification - Updated Proposal

[Mike Edwards <mike_edwards@uk.ibm.com>]

Dave,

Many thanks for the review - I have
dealt with all your points in a new revision here:

http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/sca-j/download.php/33599/sca-springci-1.1-spec-WD02%2BIssue106v3.pdf
http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/sca-j/download.php/33600/sca-springci-1.1-spec-WD02%2BIssue106v3.doc


Yours,  Mike.

Strategist - Emerging Technologies, SCA & SDO.
Co Chair OASIS SCA Assembly TC.
IBM Hursley Park, Mail Point 146, Winchester, SO21 2JN, Great Britain.
Phone & FAX: +44-1962-818014    Mobile: +44-7802-467431  
Email:  mike_edwards@uk.ibm.com

From:	David Booz <booz@us.ibm.com>
To:	sca-j@lists.oasis-open.org
Date:	29/07/2009 19:17
Subject:	Re: [sca-j] [ISSUE 106] RFC2119 Language is needed for Spring C&I Specification - Updated Proposal

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Hi Mike,

From the pdf:

1) line 31 - may

2) lines 87-95 seem to have some normative material. There also a lowercase
'must'. That might text might be more appropriately placed in a section
on packaging? I noticed that some of this same material appears in section
4, but it's not marked and labelled there either.

You may be surprised by all the changes this
prompted.  Section 4 is now festooned with normative statements ;-)
I removed the material from 87-95 entirely,
since it is all supposed to be in section 4.

3) line 155, 195, 233 - lower case must


Dave Booz
STSM, BPM and SCA Architecture
Co-Chair OASIS SCA-Policy TC and SCA-J TC
"Distributed objects first, then world hunger"
Poughkeepsie, NY (845)-435-6093 or 8-295-6093
e-mail:booz@us.ibm.com

Mike
Edwards ---07/29/2009 11:44:59 AM---Anish, Comments below...

From:	Mike Edwards <mike_edwards@uk.ibm.com>
To:	OASIS Java <sca-j@lists.oasis-open.org>
Date:	07/29/2009 11:44 AM
Subject:	Re: [sca-j] [ISSUE 106] RFC2119 Language is needed for Spring C&I Specification - Updated Proposal

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Anish, 

Comments below... 

updated proposal here: 

http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/sca-j/download.php/33582/sca-springci-1.1-spec-WD02%2BIssue106v2.pdf
http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/sca-j/download.php/33581/sca-springci-1.1-spec-WD02%2BIssue106v2.doc

Yours, Mike.

Strategist - Emerging Technologies, SCA & SDO.
Co Chair OASIS SCA Assembly TC.
IBM Hursley Park, Mail Point 146, Winchester, SO21 2JN, Great Britain.
Phone & FAX: +44-1962-818014 Mobile: +44-7802-467431 
Email: mike_edwards@uk.ibm.com

From:	Anish Karmarkar <Anish.Karmarkar@oracle.com>
To:	OASIS Java <sca-j@lists.oasis-open.org>
Date:	27/07/2009 15:18
Subject:	Re: [sca-j] [ISSUE 106] RFC2119 Language is needed for Spring C&I Specification - Proposal

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Thanks Mike.
Two comments:
1) Any particular reason not to reference the latest spring release 
(2.5.x) rather than 2.0.x? 

No reason - thanks for spotting this. 

2) I would like to suggest that the last stmt in section 5.1 be changed
from:

Such an SCA Spring Component Implementation Composite Document MUST be
a 
conformant SCA Composite Document, as defined by [ASSEMBLY], and MUST 
comply with the requirements specified in Section 5 of this specification.

to:

Such an SCA Spring Component Implementation Composite Document MUST be
a 
conformant SCA Composite Document, as defined by [ASSEMBLY], and MUST 
comply with >>>additional constraints on the document content
as defined 
in Appendix B.<<<

I'm using the language from the assembly spec. Section 5 doesn't specify
any requirements for the composite document, but section 2 does (I 
suspect you meant to say section 2 and not 5).

OK, thanks - updated as you suggest.

-Anish
--

PS: I'm at a f2f this week and may not be able to attend the call today.

Mike Edwards wrote:
> 
> Folks,
> 
> I've created a proposal for Issue 106 here:
> 
> http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/sca-j/download.php/33534/sca-springci-1.1-spec-WD02%2BIssue106.pdf
> 
> http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/sca-j/download.php/33533/sca-springci-1.1-spec-WD02%2BIssue106.doc
> 
> 
> Comments welcome
> 
> Yours,  Mike.
> 
> Strategist - Emerging Technologies, SCA & SDO.
> Co Chair OASIS SCA Assembly TC.
> IBM Hursley Park, Mail Point 146, Winchester, SO21 2JN, Great Britain.
> Phone & FAX: +44-1962-818014    Mobile: +44-7802-467431
 
> Email:  mike_edwards@uk.ibm.com
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