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Subject: RE: [sdd] 2.2.11
The original:
2.2.11 The SDD specification must support the ability for
the author to define the information in order to specify description information
for components and requirements, to allow a provisioning application or
installation program to construct a relevant message in the event of dependency
check failures, progress messages and change execution failures. This is
intended to assist a user in understanding errors and other messages, which may
occur during the deployment lifecycle process
John's rewrite:
Option 1) 2.2.11 The SDD specification must support the ability for
the author to define the information to allow a provisioning application or
installation program to construct relevant feedback for progress, dependency
check failures, and change execution failures.
My wordsmithing that maintains John's meaning:
Option 2) 2.2.11 The SDD specification must support definition of
information which allows a provisioning application or installation program to
construct relevant feedback for progress, dependency check failures and change
execution failures.
Please vote for an option
or suggest an alternative along with the rationale for your
suggestion.
Julia McCarthy
Autonomic Computing
Enablement
julia@us.ibm.com
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349/8156
877-261-0391
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