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Subject: RE: [sdd] 2.3
The original:
2.3 Projected
Changes to Environment: In addition to describing the content of a solution
package and the appropriate information required to install this content, the
SDD specification must support the ability for the author to define information
in order to describe the changes to the environment once the package is
installed. This information enables a provisioning application to better manage
the system resources.In addition, this information is required during the
integration phase of the deployment lifecycle as the solution requires specific
capabilities to be deployed to complete the solution. Just knowing the payload
of the package is not adequate.
John's
rewrite:
Option 1) 2.3 The SDD specification must
support the ability for the author to define information that describes the
changes to the environment after a deployment lifecycle operation is complete.
The SDD specification must support the ability for the author to define
requirements that need to be met during the integration phase of the deployment
lifecycle operation.
Discussion:
I don't understand what the second sentence means. What is "the
integration phase"?
I also suggest the following
wordsmithing for the first sentence of this requirement:
2.3 The SDD specification must support declaration of environment
changes that will be in affect once a lifecycle operation is complete.
Julia
McCarthy
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