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Subject: RE: [sdd] 2.10.2
- From: "Robert Dickau" <rdickau@macrovision.com>
- To: "Patton, John H" <John.Patton@ca.com>,<sdd@lists.oasis-open.org>
- Date: Fri, 3 Mar 2006 09:50:45 -0600
Agreed that this suggestion is
an improvement over mushy "must support the ability for the author to define
specify [sic] a means to...".
Further tinkering
("defining"-->"definition of", trying to avoid tricky-to-parse
"deploying...to and configuring...in"):
2.10.2
The SDD specification must
support definition of requirements for deploying and configuring solution
resources even across distributed and administratively separate
locations.
Original
2.10.2
The SDD specification must support the ability for
the author to define specify a means to acquire external requirements even if
they reside in distributed and administratively separated
locations.
My
suggestion
2.10.2
The SDD
specification must support defining requirements for deploying solution
resources to and configuring resources in distributed and
administratively separate locations.
I think this
satisfies UC 151 a bit more.
cheers,
/john
patton/
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