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Subject: RE: Core 0.15 draft
Just noticed that 1.3.2 needs some work. First, based on the order in the schema and the discusion under 1.3.2 Subject, the following sections should go: NameIdentifier SubjectConfirmation AssertionSpecifier Next, since AuthenticationMethod is a sub-element of SubjectConfirmation, it should go a level down in the outline. Finally, the description of AssertionSpecifier is omitted. Thus I think the outline should be: 1.3.2 Subject 1.3.2.1 NameIdentifier 1.3.2.2 SubjectConfirmation 1.3.2.2.1 AuthenticationMethod (I believe this is now SubjectConfirmationMethod) 1.3.2.3 AssertionSpecifier It is also confusing that terminals and items defined in other schemas do not get a subsection. I think it would be cleaner to either include the discussion of all sub elements in the section on the parent element or have a numbered section for evey element and sub-element. For example, currently AuthenticationMethod is discussed in both 1.3.2.1 and 1.3.2.2. Hal > -----Original Message----- > From: Hallam-Baker, Phillip [mailto:pbaker@verisign.com] > Sent: Tuesday, August 21, 2001 1:59 PM > To: Security-Services (E-mail) > Cc: Security-Editors (E-mail) > Subject: Core 0.15 draft > > > Attached are the core 0.15 draft and acompanying schemas, the pretty > pictures will follow separately. > > Phill > > Phillip Hallam-Baker FBCS C.Eng. > Principal Scientist > VeriSign Inc. > pbaker@verisign.com > 781 245 6996 x227 > > >
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