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Subject: [security-services] Draft-sstc-sec-consider-03a.doc
A new rev containing only the editorial changes Eve requested. C. > -----Original Message----- > From: Eve L. Maler [mailto:eve.maler@sun.com] > Sent: Wednesday, January 09, 2002 5:08 PM > To: cmclaren@netegrity.com; security-services@lists.oasis-open.org > Subject: Re: [security-services] Draft-sstc-sec-consider-03.doc > > > Editorial suggestions (most can wait, but a few need to be > done before the > big deadline): > > - Remove the 02a revision history row (it was just for > internal consumption). > - Change the Status to mention the security-services-comment > list instead > of being inwardly focused. > - Remove the change tracking. > - When referring to sections, s/section/Section/ > - Where footnotes just provide citations, add a bibliography > entry in the > back and a cross-reference in the text. > - Ensure that cross-references to bibliography entries are > "extra"; the > flow of sentences shouldn't rely on their presence. > > > > At 04:46 PM 1/9/02 -0400, Chris McLaren wrote: > >Here's the latest, incorporating the following: > > > >1) Eve's changes > >2) My changes in response to Eve's comments > >3) Comments and changes from Prateek > >4) Filling in my TBDs > >5) Added a section on Key Management (background on the > limitations of > >security based on key-to-identity binding strength) > >6) Added a Privacy section. This is basically a comment that > you should > >keep private things confidential combined with a section on anonymity > >that is based pretty heavily on Marlena's notes to the list. > > > >I am looking forward to comments and additional text from > everyone, as > >they review the document. > > > >C. > > -- > Eve Maler +1 781 442 3190 > Sun Microsystems XML Technology Center eve.maler @ sun.com >
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