Re: [security-services] Groups - sstc-saml-constrained-delegation-profile-draft-00.pdf uploaded

[Prateek Mishra <prateek.mishra@oracle.com>]

A couple of comments on this doc (mostly editorial).

> - line 95 appears to start with a blank.
>
[Prateek] Yes, there are several blank lines I need to remove.

> - line 137 the reference to the SAML Token Profile is missing in 
> section 4.
>
[Prateek] I will add this in the next revision.

> - line 138 AudienceRestrictionElement> should be replaced with 
> AudienceRestriction> element containing a <saml:Audience> element.
>
[Prateek] I will correct this in the next version, we might also change 
this usage and use a new type of condition to signal delegation use.

> - lines 147-148 I'm not clear  if bullet 3  should be listed here. 
> Isn't this already stated in core  (so why  repeat it here)? Put 
> another way, if this step was missing, could  I  assume that these  
> subj conf items (NotBefore, Recipient, ...) would not have to be 
> satisfied to confirm the subject?
>
[Prateek] I guess this is covered by lines 236-137; this might be 
included in an informational section or example. So, yes, dont see why 
we need to repeat it here.

> Tom.
>
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> > Document Description:
> > First draft of SAML 2.0 Constrained Delegation Profile (pdf)
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