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Subject: RE: [soa-eerp] I008: Some editorial comments on draft Rating spec
Working Draft 03, uploaded at http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/32571/BusinessRating-v1.0- spec-wd03.pdf . It inserted the section 6 Conformance section. The issue can be closed. Szu Chang 源郵件: ----------------- 發件人: eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn 日期: Sat, 9 May 2009 21:47:53 -0400 收件者: soa-eerp@lists.oasis-open.org 主題: [soa-eerp] I008: Some editorial comments on draft Rating spec Working Draft 02, uploaded at http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/32470/BusinessRating-v1.0- spec-wd02.doc, has the following changes: Insert the proposed text per Rex Brooks on Page 1, Related work and Page 2 status. The Conformance section has been removed. This issue can be closed. Szu Chang 源郵件: ----------------- 發件人: Hong Zhou eerp_hz@changfeng.org.cn 日期: Wed, 6 May 2009 17:39:35 +0200 收件者: eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn, soa-eerp@lists.oasis-open.org 主題: Re: [soa-eerp] New Issue: Some editorial comments on draft Rating spec Issue number: I008 ----- Original Message ----- From: <eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn> To: <soa-eerp@lists.oasis-open.org> Sent: Tuesday, May 05, 2009 10:14 AM Subject: [soa-eerp] New Issue: Some editorial comments on draft Rating spec PLEASE DO NOT REPLY TO THIS EMAIL OR START A DISCUSSISON THREAD UNTIL THE ISSUE IS ASSIGNED A NUMBER. The issues coordinators will notify the list when that has occurred. Protocol: Rating http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/soa-eerp/download.php/32209/Rat ing-v1.0-spec-wd01.doc Artifact: spec Type: editorial Title: Some editorial comments on draft Rating spec Description: This issue was raised during the spec review at the TC meeting on 4/29/2009. Carl Mattocks suggested that may be mitigated by stating STATUS and intended USE of (draft) document in beginning. Carl Mattocks also commented that the CONFORMANCE section in the WD01 looks bad, but a CONFORMANCE section must be in the document , certainly before published outside of TC Related issues: This issue should also apply to both bQoS and SLA specs. Proposed Resolution: Insert the following text to all three spec per Rex Brooks: “This document is a Work in Progress only and has not been extensively reviewed. Comment on this document is encouraged. This document is one of three closely related specifications, SOA-EERP Business Quality of Service (bQoS), SOA-EERP Rating and SOA-EERP Service Level Agreement which need to be understood in combination as a set.” Szu Chang proposed to remove the Conformance section for now. The section can be added before public review. -------------------------------------------------------------------- mail2web – 從 web 檢查您的電子郵件，網址 http://mail2web.com/ . --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe from this mail list, you must leave the OASIS TC that generates this mail. Follow this link to all your TCs in OASIS at: https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/portal/my_workgroups.php -------------------------------------------------------------------- mail2web – 從 web 檢查您的電子郵件，網址 http://mail2web.com/ .
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