Re: [soa-eerp] I028: BSLA: Various Editorial 1

["eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn" <eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn>]

New working Draft WD06 uploaded at 
www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/33244/BusinessServiceLevelAgreeme
nt-v1.0-spec-wd06.pdf and it fixed the template problem. 

This issue changed from pending close to Closed.


Original Message:
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From: William Cox wtcox@CoxSoftwareArchitects.com
Date: Wed, 24 Jun 2009 18:53:21 -0400
To: eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn, wtcox@coxsoftwarearchitects.com,
soa-eerp@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: Re: [soa-eerp] I028: BSLA:  Various Editorial 1


OK to close pending review

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eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn wrote:
> SOA-EERP BusinessServiceLevelAgreement v1.0 spec working draft 05 (WD05) 
> is uploaded at:
>
http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/33073/BusinessServiceLevel
> Agreement-v1.0-spec-wd05.pdf 
>
> Fixed the issue same as I026. 
>
> This issue should be closed. 
>
>
> Szu Chang
>
> Original Message:
> -----------------
> From: eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn
> Date: Sun, 21 Jun 2009 00:33:47 -0400
> To: wtcox@coxsoftwarearchitects.com, soa-eerp@lists.oasis-open.org
> Subject: [soa-eerp] I028: BSLA:  Various Editorial 1
>
>
> Issue # I028 
>
> For BSLA Spec only. 
>
> Relate issue are: I026 and I027. 
>
> Original Message:
> -----------------
> From: William Cox wtcox@CoxSoftwareArchitects.com
> Date: Sat, 20 Jun 2009 20:52:17 -0400
> To: soa-eerp@lists.oasis-open.org
> Subject: [soa-eerp] NEW Issue: Various Editorial 1
>
>
> PLEASE DO NOT REPLY TO THIS EMAIL OR START A DISCUSSION THREAD UNTIL THE 
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>
> Protocol: bqos / rating / sla /
>
> Artifact: spec
>
> Type: editorial
>
> Title: Various Editorial 1
>
> Description:
>
> These editorial corrections are referenced to 
>
http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/32576/BusinessQualityOfSer
> vice-v1.0-spec-wd04.pdf 
> but apply to all three specifications; line numbers are in BQOS. 
>
> (1) Change "Bill Cox" to "William Cox" wherever it occurs, under 
> "Chairs" and line 457.
>
> (2) Remove extra blank lines between paragraphs--the template style 
> spaces between paragraphs. For example, after all other changes are 
> completed remove lines 49, 59,  65, 71, 73, 76, etc.
>
> (3) Under related work on title page delete " as a set." This is
redundant.
>
> (4) Change abstract on title page to "This document specifies the XML 
> vocabulary for business quality of service (bQoS), one of three 
> specifications for end-to-end resource planning (EERP). Business quality 
> of service describes the business-related characteristics or attributes 
> of a service."  Similar for the other two specifications.
>
> (5) Structure documents per the current OASIS specification template at 
> http://docs.oasis-open.org/templates/OASISSpecificationTemplateV3.2.dot 
> . Some issues are the order of the start, e.g., The brief introduction 
> is followed by 1.1 Terminology then 1.2 Normative References, and so 
> forth. See, for example, 
>
http://docs.oasis-open.org/ebxml-msg/ebms/v3.0/profiles/200707/AS4-profile-c
> d-01.pdf
>
> (6) Line 25 delete.
>
> (7) List of participants - I'll have to check in detail.  Eliminate 
> commas after each name.
>
> Related issues:
>
> Proposed Resolution:
>
> Correct as indicated.
>
>   


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