RE: [soa-rm-comment] Textual issues in SOA-RAF 1.0 prd 02

[Ken Laskey <klaskey@mitre.org>]

Marco,

Thank you for your comments.  They have all been accepted and appropriate 
changes will be reflected in the next public document.

Ken

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-----Original Message-----
From: Marco van Zwetselaar [mailto:zwets@zwets.com]
Sent: Wednesday, August 31, 2011 12:30 PM
To: soa-rm-comment@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [soa-rm-comment] Textual issues in SOA-RAF 1.0 prd 02

TC members,

My compliments on the SOA reference architecture foundation. You have
produced an insightful and comprehensive piece of work.

I spotted the following textual issues in the SOA-RAF 1.0 public review
draft 02:

Line 2908 is a misplaced figure caption.

Line 2909 seems to be the end of a missing paragraph.

Line 2912 heading should be "Authorization", not Authentication.

Line 2916 hovering popup for the diagram shows gibberish.

Best regards,
Marco





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