Re: [soa-rm-ra] First pass at initial paragraphs for SOA RA Purpose

[Ken Laskey <klaskey@mitre.org>]

My overall handwritten (hopefully to be transcribed soon) comments on section 2.1 are:

This needs to be shorter and crisper.  it goes on too long, with too many random ideas of varying granularity, and leaves the reader with a muddled picture of where we're going and why.

I agree that we shouldn't throw away the requirements work.  However, if reading our requirements doesn't nail it for me, how can we expect it to clarify things for others?

Ken

On Jun 18, 2007, at 2:35 PM, Francis McCabe wrote:

I would like to know if what we did on requirements has been forgotten, or is being ignored in this exercise.

If not, then the requirements (should) pretty much spell out what our mission is in the RA

Frank

On Jun 18, 2007, at 11:00 AM, Rex Brooks wrote:

Hi Folks,

I did, at least, get started, and I have attached the initial page. I figured I had better send this off lest I head down a blind alley.

Cheers,

Rex

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