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Subject: Relative No Brainer Edit
Hi Folks, Going through the document line by line uncovered an apparently misplaced newly or newly moved section; Section 4.1.1.2 Assigning Values to Description Instances. This contains Figure 21. It was placed before current Sections 4.1.1.2.1, Provenance; 4.1.1.2.2 Keywords and Classification Terms; and 4.1.1.2.3 Associated Annotations. These components are shown in Figure 20 General Description under 4.1.1.1 Model Elements Common to General Description. For readability, these three short descriptive sections should follow Figure 20 and precede 4.1.1.2 Assigning Values to Description Instances. I noticed this because I happen to like 4.1.1.2 very much, but it is very slightly out of sequence. Cheers, Rex -- Rex Brooks President, CEO Starbourne Communications Design GeoAddress: 1361-A Addison Berkeley, CA 94702 Tel: 510-898-0670
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