Re: [soa-rm-ra] Section 3 revision

[Rex Brooks <rexb@starbourne.com>]

Hi Danny, Frank, Everyone,

I have finally managed to clear my plate; begin work on new projects and 
re-engage ongoing work, which is the slot our RAF occupies in my 
priorities.

So, is this all based on the snapshot as of 6-29-10? I just downloaded 
that file.

I note that Frank's original message below was sent on 6-26-10 which 
also corresponds to the date of the last previous snapshot before 
6-29-10 version I downloaded, and I want to be sure I am looking at the 
correct snapshot. What I see in the 6-29 snapshot includes the 
struck-through material.

I want to make sure I'm reading and commenting on the same version as 
everyone else.

Cheers,
Rex

Thornton, Danny R (IS) wrote:
> I read through the updates for policies and contracts in Section 3 and
> Section 4.  Section 4 policy modifications do incorporate separate
> definitions for policy decision and policy enforcement.
>
> In section 3.1.3, Shared State and Social Facts, Figure 9 has the
> labeled association 'perceives' between Participant and Social Fact.  I
> would suggest leaving perception as a discussion for Section 3.2.3,
> Trust and Risk.  One thing that raising a teenager teaches is that a
> person's perception of facts is often as unique as a fingerprint. It
> did not seem appropriate to discuss this in section 3.1.3.
>
> Section 3 and Section 4 duplicate the text on Permission and Obligation.
> I would remove the discussion of permissions and obligations from
> Section 3 and leave it in Section 4 and update Figure 10 and Figure 47
> accordingly.  
>
> Danny
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Francis McCabe [mailto:fmccabe@gmail.com] 
> Sent: Saturday, June 26, 2010 1:43 PM
> To: soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org RA
> Subject: [soa-rm-ra] Section 3 revision
>
> I have 'gone through' section 3 reorganizing it and adjusting quite a
> lot of the text. 
> I have added a preliminary version of architectural implications. There
> is likely to be further 'stuff' in this section.
>
> Occasionally, I felt that a slightly radical edit was required. In that
> case I kept the original text but with strike-through.
>
> Some diagrams will need to be updated. I have left comments where I
> could to signal the required change.
>
> Frank
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