Re: [soa-rm-ra] revised diagram

[mpoulin@usa.com]

Yes, Jeff,

 this change is a part of the stack of changes I've proposed for the section 4 (that I've been supposed to work with you on) for the last 4 weeks together with the changes to the section 3 that are now formulated by Ken for 'ecosystem'.

This diagram, even without the text, jumps into eyes because of its inconsistency with service orientation.

I am at your service to complete the work on the changes for the section 4. In the submitted file, I put all proposed texts in to the places, not only critical comments.

- Michael

-----Original Message-----
From: Estefan, Jeff A (3100) <jeffrey.a.estefan@jpl.nasa.gov>
To: soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org <soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org>
Sent: Wed, Nov 17, 2010 6:12 pm
Subject: RE: [soa-rm-ra] revised diagram

Michael,

 

We folded in ALL of your recommended updates to the RAF that you submitted from the public review.  Are you now making new recommended changes to the text or just this diagram?

 

- Jeff

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