Re: [soa-rm-ra] Groups - New Editors' Draft, 21 Dec 2010 - Clean (Editors'Draft-2010-12-21 (Clean).pdf) uploaded

[mpoulin@usa.com]

We have a bit more problems with "mediator" in the section  4.2.2.1.1 Mediated Awareness:

the phrase:

Rather than all potential service consumers being informed on a 

2010 continual basis about all services, there is a known or agreed upon facility or location 

2011 that houses the service description

which I agree with, does not make previous phrase:

2007 Mediated awareness promotes loose coupling by keeping the consumers and services 

2008 from explicitly referring to each other and the descriptions. Mediation lets interaction 

2009 vary independently. 

consistent with our own interpretation of Service Contract! This phrase (lines 2007-2009) allows business consumer do not know business service provider (this is pure technical integration {Web Service} mindset), which is unacceptable in Business. The next phrase - "Mediation lets interaction 2009 vary independently" allows a mediator to concur all business transactions in the enterprise and the owner of this mediator becomes a controller of the company. I vote by both hands against this.

I propose:

1) remove phrase "Mediation lets interaction 2009 vary independently. "

2) changes the phrase "2007 Mediated awareness promotes loose coupling by keeping the consumers and services 2008 from explicitly referring to each other and the descriptions." into:

"2007 Mediated awareness promotes loose coupling by keeping the consumers referring to the Service Descriptions independently from the service provider."

- Michael

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