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Subject: RE: [soa-rm-ra] New draft, WD09-20120808
Sir, your last word is granted…. ;-) Shall I cut this new draft in to the Gold Copy? Peter From: Ken Laskey [mailto:klaskey@mitre.org]
Superb! But to get the last word in, change “a ‘Architectural Implications’ section”
to “an ‘Architectural Implications’ section”. Ken From: Peter F Brown
[mailto:peter@peterfbrown.com]
Thanks Ken. I couldn’t resist word-smithing a bit further. Hope it looks ok… Peter From: Ken Laskey
[mailto:klaskey@mitre.org] Attached is a proposed revision of the conformance section. Most is wordsmithing the first subsection. I’ve saved it hiding the Track Changes so it is more readable.
You can view the specific changes as useful. Ken --------------------------------------------------------------------------- Dr. Kenneth Laskey MITRE Corporation, M/S H305 phone: 703-983-7934 7515 Colshire Drive fax: 703-983-1379 McLean VA 22102-7508 From:
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On Behalf Of Peter F Brown Hi, As promised, and slightly earlier than planned, here is the new draft, with all items of the punch list addressed. The texts to be checked through in particular are:
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Kevin’s section 5.2 on security (I included his most recent edits from this Saturday);
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My new proposal regarding section 6, taking on Ken and Rex’s suggestions along with my earlier draft Have at it….use line numbers of the PDF for any comments… Regards, Peter
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