Ken, all,
I tried to work through all of Danny’s comments – many are indeed grammatical and I’m working through them to include in an updated edit.
Several (around one theme of mediated awareness and related discussion) are however substantive and would likely trigger a new review. We need to discuss whether we want to go there.
Attached is a quick update of Danny’s spreadsheet
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