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Subject: Re: [soa-rm] [issue:structure] draft 07, sect 2, line 201, Figure2-1
<current> Figure 2-1 SOA Architectural Model </current> <suggested> Remove the figure. </suggested> <notes> Sorry, but this figure is rather vacuous. All we see are a bunch of rectangles stacked together with no obvious relationship between them. Some of the rectangles have an "is-a" relationship to their neighbor, while others have a "describes" relationship and some I cannot even decipher what the relationship should be. I understand that people feel UML is too technical for this document, however, diagrams like this detract from the document's readibility. Try using a concept map if you really want to place a diagram at this point. </notes>
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