[issue:content] draft 07, sect2.1.2, line 249, There are multiple definitions of data model in the spec...recommend adopting this one

["Chiusano Joseph" <chiusano_joseph@bah.com>]

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Line 249, gives what I believe is the clearest definition of data model in the spec: “This logical expression of the set of information items associated with the consumption of the service is often referred to as the service’s data model.” There is an earlier reference to the concept of a data model on line 189, but it is not as clear as the definition on line 249.

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Replace the first reference to "data model" on line 189 with the definition on line 249, and refer to the new definition on line 189 from line 249 if necessary.

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Brings specification into compliance with terminology blah blah.

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Kind Regards,

Joseph Chiusano

Booz Allen Hamilton

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