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Subject: Re: [soa-rm] Groups - Editor's draft of PR2 (soa-rm pr2 changes.pdf) uploaded
Ken: I am a little confused about some of your comments: On May 19, 2006, at 3:40 PM, Ken Laskey wrote: > > - Issue 539: Proposed Disposition was modified when edits made and > this led to some side effects > (1) lost first bolding of "shared state" fixed > (2) lines 548-549 redundant with lines 550-552 fixed > (3) some wording intended to improve consistency of information > return as an aspect of real world effect was lost do not know what you are referring to here > (4) other agreed clarifications were lost Ditto > The discussion leading to PD was email thread concluding 4/26/2006 > with my accepting Peter's final changes. This version is reflected > in the spreadsheet. > > - Issue 560: reminder that arrow still needs to be extended > I have asked Matt for a new diagram, am about to give up and redraw > - Issue 567 (or 534-4): resolution during May 3 call was not to > change (now line 311). Believe this also applies to line 595. > Totally confused here. I though that we agreed to remove the "one or more" reference > Other things noticed: > - Text added in the Abstract references Figure 1. Should the > Abstract directly reference rather than just summarize the body of > the document? This is probably weird; but it was agreed! I can take out the reference easily > - Section 1.5.1 > -- line 106: is there a reason Concept is capitalized? Its in the diagram .. > -- lines 110-112: more accurately, "The relationships between > concepts in this document are not labeled; the relationship is > described in the immediately preceding or subsequent text." fixed > -- lines 113-117: all of our relationships have arrows, so is > there any need for these lines? leave it in, just in case? > -- suggest combining Figures 2 and 4, deleting Figure 3 and > saying, "Concept maps are used within this document to indicate > concepts and relationships being discussed in the surrounding > text. There is no normative convention for interpreting concept > maps. As used in this document a line between two concepts > represents a relationship, where the relationship is not labeled > but rather is described in the text immediately preceding or > following the figure. The arrow on a line indicates an > asymmetrical relationship, where the concept to which the arrow > points (Concept 2 in Figure 2) can be interpreted as depending in > some way on the concept from which the line originates (Concept > 1). The text accompanying each graphic describes the nature of > each relationship." Agreed. > > Now starting to work on all the responses I've got actions on. > > Ken > > At 04:35 AM 5/16/2006, frank.mccabe@us.fujitsu.com wrote: >> Please review. >> Figure 1 has an outstanding edit; otherwise all dispositions >> agreed to should be accounted for. -- Dr. Francis McCabe The >> document named Editor's draft of PR2 (soa-rm pr2 changes.pdf) has >> been submitted by Dr. Francis McCabe to the OASIS SOA Reference >> Model TC document repository. Document Description: This is an >> editor's draft of the second Public Review of the RM v. 1 >> This has markup to highlight the differences between this version >> and PR1. View Document Details: http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/ >> workgroup/soa-rm/document.php?document_id=18173 Download Document: >> http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/soa-rm/download.php/ >> 18173/soa-rm%20pr2%20changes.pdf PLEASE NOTE: If the above links >> do not work for you, your email application may be breaking the >> link into two pieces. You may be able to copy and paste the >> entire link address into the address field of your web browser. - >> OASIS Open Administration br > > -- > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > ----------- > / Ken > Laskey > \ > | MITRE Corporation, M/S H305 phone: 703-983-7934 | > | 7515 Colshire Drive fax: > 703-983-1379 | > \ McLean VA > 22102-7508 / > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > ------------ >
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