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Subject: [tm-pubsubj-comment] Review of Deliverable 1 by Patrick Durusau
> There has been no comment on the final draft posted in September, and I'm still waiting > for the linguistic brushing promised by Steve. Steve had passed the baby to Patrick Durusau, who has sent me a complete re-writing proposal of Deliverable 1. Although Patrick is not an official TC member, he has attended all F2F TC meetings so far as invited guest, and was certainly highly qualified for such a reviewing task, based on its expertise in Topic Maps, English language and juridical matters, among other outstanding merites :)) I'm very pleased myself with Patrick's review, but it brings substantive editorial changes that go further than simple rewording, e.g. getting rid of a certain number of superfluous prose. So, before changing the draft, I've posted Patrick's review for comments at: http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/tm-pubsubj/docs/pld/d1review.txt It's a plain text version, tagged by Patrick in original text and proposed corrections. I will send my own comments separately. Bernard ------------------------------------------------------------------- Bernard Vatant Consultant - Mondeca www.mondeca.com Chair - OASIS TM PubSubj Technical Committee www.oasis-open.org/committees/tm-pubsubj/ -------------------------------------------------------------------
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