Re: [ubl-fpsc] Candidate Final

["G. Ken Holman" <gkholman@CraneSoftwrights.com>]

At 2004-04-21 13:11 +0100, Jean McInerney wrote:
>I have not found any problems with the latest package.

Thank you for taking the time to look.

I discovered I missed your suggested change of removing the amount column 
from the Order Cancellation and have just done so.

That led me to check Order Response Simple and I had *also* missed removing 
it there, so have just done so.

>I have checked some links but unfortunately can not check them all,

Yes, of course.

>those that I have checked worked fine..

Thanks.

>However I have a couple of very minor points:
>Use of the words 'mimic' or 'mimicked' should be consistent, see below
>United Nations Layout Key mimic form 320: Simple Order Acknowledgement
>United Nations Layout Key mimicked form 320: Order Cancellation

Good points, Jean, not minor ... and, actually, I now don't think we should 
use the word mimic, so I've rewritten Order Cancellation and Order Response 
Simple to be described as subsets of Order Response rather than mimics.

>The colon : is missing following the form number 632, all of the other forms
>are OK.
>United Nations Layout Key 632 Receipt Advice

I went into my copy of the UNECE descriptions for forms and found the 
description for Goods Receipt and added it:

   632 Goods receipt: Document issued by a port, warehouse/shed,
   or terminal operator acknowledging receipt of goods specified
   therein on conditions stated or referred to in the document.

Interestingly, I could not find a UNECE description for 230 Order Change 
... I'm reading the United Nations Key for Trade Documents, Guidelines for 
Application, Informative Annex to Recommendation 1, 2002.

Here is the latest for you to look at and for Jon to include:

   http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/6491/fs-20040421-1600z.zip

Thanks for this valuable feedback, Jean!

................... Ken

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