I would sugest to change term "non repudiation" to "content commitment" (see RFC 5280, ITU-T X.509 Corrigendum 3 (04/2004). and new -after 2004- X.509 (2008-11) ) in page 2.
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El 18/04/2011 0:15, Andrea Caccia escribió:
24C000A1-0C14-43C1-89A0-1114235E5CD0@studiocaccia.com" type="cite">Sorry for this long delay, I attach here a PDF with comments, deleted (barred) and added text (in red). It addresses also Ken's question. Thank you for al the corrections and fixes. AndreaIl giorno 12/apr/2011, alle ore 16.17, Jon Bosak ha scritto:Hello Andrea, Have you had a chance to look at Ken's question yet? Jon Andrea Caccia wrote:I apologize too for not reacting yet, I'll do by the end of this week. Andrea Il giorno 04/apr/2011, alle ore 03.12, G. Ken Holman ha scritto:At 2011-03-19 21:49 -0400, Jon Bosak wrote:Please review this new draft carefully, keeping in mind that the editor (me) has very little knowledge of digital signature technology and can easily introduce technical errors in the process of working with the language.I found something I didn't see before: Both the Terms and Definitions (1.1.1) and section 2.2 make reference to an enveloping signature, yet we don't provide a profile for such. Should we explicitly acknowledge (perhaps in section 2.4) that we are not providing a profile for such (so the reader realizes nothing is inadvertently missing), or change the existing text to say something along the lines of "Two of the ways an XML Signature may be described are as detached and enveloped."? It might be enough that in 2.4 we alread say "specifies two profiles..." so the reader knows nothing is missing.This document is intended to form part of UBL 2.1 and will be included in UBL 2.1 PRD2. In order to keep to our projected schedule for PRD2, I am setting a one-week review cycle for the draft attached. If any member of the Security SC sees something that needs to be corrected or added to this draft, please register the change to this mail list before COB Sunday 27 March 2011.Please forgive me that my leave of absence prevented me from submitting my comments in a timely fashion. The document looks good to me, Jon ... thank you for your efforts. I hope this helps. . . . . . . . . . . Ken -- Contact us for world-wide XML consulting & instructor-led training Crane Softwrights Ltd. http://www.CraneSoftwrights.com/o/ G. Ken Holman mailto:gkholman@CraneSoftwrights.com Legal business disclaimers: http://www.CraneSoftwrights.com/legal --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe from this mail list, you must leave the OASIS TC that generates this mail. Follow this link to all your TCs in OASIS at: https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/portal/my_workgroups.php--------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe from this mail list, you must leave the OASIS TC that generates this mail. Follow this link to all your TCs in OASIS at: https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/portal/my_workgroups.php--------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe from this mail list, you must leave the OASIS TC that generates this mail. Follow this link to all your TCs in OASIS at: https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/portal/my_workgroups.php--------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe from this mail list, you must leave the OASIS TC that generates this mail. Follow this link to all your TCs in OASIS at: https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/portal/my_workgroups.php