RE: [ubl-tsc] Groups - Process model document (Proposal for UBL 2.0 transport process-20051213.doc) uploaded

["Kama, Kamarudin Bin Tambi" <kama@crimsonlogic.com>]

I've gone thru it. Pls find below my comments.

1. Version History
Lets call this one version 0.2. Please include Jern Kuan as one of the
author.

2. Background
Please include CrimsonLogic as one of the parties involved in the
discussion.

3. Section 2.
a. Fig 1 Use Case - Delivery Process, or Initiate Transport Service
Process
b. We need a Use Case diagram for Freight Billing Process

4. Section 2.1.
Don't think we focus on transport process flow only. Hence, have to add
certificate of origin of goods and freight billing process as well.

5. Section 3.1.
Five types of documents? Think should be 4.

Section 3.1.4
arrangment - misspelled.

Rgds
Kama



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Subject: [ubl-tsc] Groups - Process model document (Proposal for UBL 2.0
transport process-20051213.doc) uploaded

The document revision named Process model document (Proposal for UBL 2.0
transport process-20051213.doc) has been submitted by Mr. Jern-Kuan
Leong
to the UBL Transportation SC document repository.  This document is
revision #2 of Proposal for UBL 2.0 transport process-20051204.doc.

Document Description:
Updated with changes
1. diagrams 
2. seperation of freight billing process.
3. New COO diagram and use case.


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