RE: [uddi-spec] Yet more comments on v3.0.1

["John Colgrave" <colgrave@hursley.ibm.com>]

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I do not agree with either of these changes.

 

John Colgrave

IBM

 

-----Original Message-----
From: Rogers, Tony [mailto:Tony.Rogers@ca.com]
Sent: 25 August 2003 08:03
To: uddi-spec@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [uddi-spec] Yet more comments on v3.0.1

 

Section 10.5 Value sets with entiity keys as values

The third sentence should read: "They must be mapped as entity keys everywhere they are used." - removing "are" and "else".

 

Section 11, opening sentence reads a little oddly. Perhaps "a set of tModels" could be "a basic set of tModels"? Or even "a canonical set of tModels"?

 

Tony Rogers

tony.rogers@ca.com