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Subject: Re: [virtio-comment] [PATCH 5/6] VIRTIO-63: Make sure examples are marked clearly.
Cornelia Huck <cornelia.huck@de.ibm.com> writes: > On Mon, 3 Mar 2014 15:31:32 +1030 > Rusty Russell <rusty@au1.ibm.com> wrote: > >> Signed-off-by: Rusty Russell <rusty@au1.ibm.com> >> --- >> content.tex | 17 ++++++++++------- >> 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) >> >> diff --git a/content.tex b/content.tex >> index f3899b6..a11525b 100644 >> --- a/content.tex >> +++ b/content.tex >> @@ -212,8 +212,8 @@ result. >> >> The mechanism for bulk data transport on virtio devices is >> pretentiously called a virtqueue. Each device can have zero or more >> -virtqueues: for example, the simplest network device has one for >> -transmit and one for receive. Each queue has a 16-bit queue size >> +virtqueues\footnote{For example, the simplest network device has one for > > I'd make that "has one _virtqueue_ for transmit" - this is probably > clearer as the footnote lacks the immediate context. Agreed, thanks. >> >> As a device can have zero or more virtqueues for bulk data >> -transport (for example, the simplest network device has two), the driver >> +transport,\footnote{For example, the simplest network device has two} the driver > > Similarily, I'd write "two virtqueues" here. Indeed. Fixed. Thanks, Rusty.
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