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Subject: RE: [PATCH v3] virtio-net: Improve introductory description
> From: Michael S. Tsirkin <mst@redhat.com> > Sent: Thursday, February 9, 2023 7:31 AM > > On Thu, Feb 09, 2023 at 01:29:57PM +0100, Cornelia Huck wrote: > > On Thu, Feb 09 2023, "Michael S. Tsirkin" <mst@redhat.com> wrote: > > > > > On Thu, Feb 09, 2023 at 03:41:08AM +0200, Parav Pandit wrote: > > >> @@ -389,8 +392,8 @@ \subsection{Device Operation}\label{sec:Device > > >> Types / Network Device / Device O }; \end{lstlisting} > > >> > > >> -The controlq is used to control device features such as > > >> -filtering. > > >> +The controlq is used to control many device features described > > >> +further in > > > > > > many seems subjective. > > > > > > s/many/some of the/ ? > > > > s/many/various/ instead? That section should cover all of the device > > features controled via the control vq. > > I like that. > Looks good. Will send v4. > > > > > >> +section \ref{sec:Device Types / Network Device / Device Operation / > Control Virtqueue}.
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