[Bug 245] Anish editorial (3)

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------- Additional Comments From mark.little@arjuna.com  2005-02-28 12:38 -------
33) figure 7, page 12
Extraneous 'CTX' in the title
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34) figure 7, page 12
All application specific URI should use http://example.org/... or 
http://example.com/... URIs and not http://docs.oasis.org/... URIs
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35) Section 4, page 13, reword line one.
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36) page 13, 1st note: add a forward reference to the right section
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37) Figure 8, page 13, the dotted arrow is titled "context generated" this 
title is misleading.  It should be "Context Manager generated".
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38) page 13, 1st bullet (regarding getContents): s/it/ContextManager
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