OASIS WS-Calendar - Comments

["Tillman, Leonard" <LTILLMAN@balch.com>]

Please see below a few proposed comments on WS-Calendar Version 1.0 - Public Review Draft 02:

 

In line 7 on page 9, insert a dash between "lead" and "times".

 

In Table 1-4 on page 14, (i) delete the word "is" the first time it appears in the second sentence for the definition of "Availability", (ii) insert a period at the end of the last sentence in the definition of "Availability, and (iii) insert a period at the end of the last sentence in the definition of "Busy". 

 

In Table 1-5 on page 15, insert a period at the end on the definition for (i) "Bequeath" and (ii) "Inherit".

 

In Table 1-6 on page 16, insert a period at the end of the definition for "Constrained".

 

In Line 371 on page 21, insert a colon after "Interval".

 

In line 454 on page 23, insert a period at the end of the sentence.

 

In line 528 on page 25, delete the phrase "one hour," and replace "three" with "3".

 

In Table 3-5 on page 29, insert the phrase "It may be 0." at the end of the definitions of "startAfterTolerance", "endBeforeTolerance" and "endAfterTolerance". 

 

In line 837 on page 31, delete "[reference]" and insert the appropriate reference.

 

In Table 3-6 on page 32, (i) delete the periods after "DateTime" and after the word "Interval" in the Use for "dtEnd", (ii) replace the comma at the end of the Discussion for "duration" with a period, and (iii) delete the extra period after "3.2." in the Discussion for "WsCalendar Attach".

 

In Line 862 on page 32, delete the word "and" after the phrase "based on".

 

In Table 3-7 on page 33, (i) delete the period after "Availability" in the Use for "dtStart", (ii) delete the extra period in the Discussion for "dtStart", (iii) delete the period after "availability" in the Use for "dtEnd", (iv) replace the comma at the end of the Discussion for "duration" with a period, and (v) insert a period at the end of the Discussion for "Availability".

 

In Table 3-8 on page 34, (i) delete the period after "Availability" in the Use for "dtStart", (ii) delete the extra period in the Discussion for "dtStart", (iii) delete the period after "availability" in the Use for "dtEnd", and (iv) insert a period at the end of the Discussion for "duration".

 

In lines 1873-1874 on page 55, the use of the word "owner" may be interpreted to apply to certain data, then a term other than "owner" should be used to avoid the legal implications associated with using the term "owner".

 

In line 2622 on page 71, delete the period.

 

In line 2625 on page 71, delete the period.

 

In line 2635 on page 71, insert a period at the end of the sentence.

 

In line 2674 on page 72, insert the word "have" between "may" and "Intervals".

 

In line 2675 on page 72, insert a space between "are" and "not". 

 

In lines 2677 and 2678 on page 72, insert periods at the end of the sentences.

 

In line 2694 on page 73, insert an "L" at the end of "SHAL".

 

In line 2821 on page 77, replace the word "Whilst" with the word "While".

 

In line 2936 on page 80, replace "prodUTCion" with "production".

 

If you have any comments or questions, please let me know.

 

Thank you.

LCT

 

Leonard C. Tillman

Balch & Bingham LLP
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Birmingham, Alabama 35203-4644
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