RE: Issue 148 - DPWS - Editorial - Reorganize Section 7

Hello everyone-

Please review the attached proposed changes for issue 148. All of the changes are to Section 6 (Security) except a minor editorial change to add a figure title.

All of the fixes are editorial only. The change tracking notes which sections were moved, and which were added/removed. In cases where I have added or removed text, I added a comment to describe the change. You may find it convenient to disable change tracking when reviewing the document for coherency and flow.

I would like to discuss these changes at the F2F meeting/call next week.

Thanks!

--D

From: Ram Jeyaraman [mailto:Ram.Jeyaraman@microsoft.com]
Sent: Tuesday, January 27, 2009 10:41 AM
To: ws-dd@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [ws-dd] Issue 148 - DPWS - Editorial - Reorganize Section 7

This issue is assigned the number 148. For further discussions on this issue, please refer to this issue number or use this thread.

From: Dan Driscoll
Sent: Friday, January 16, 2009 5:04 PM
To: Ram Jeyaraman
Subject: NEW Issue: DPWS - Editorial - Reorganize Section 7

As we clean up the functional restrictions of DPWS Section 7, the text is becoming difficult to follow. I propose that we perform an editorial-only cleanup of Section 7 to ensure the document flows properly.

This issue does not cover any changes in functionality.

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