Issue 157 - DPWS - Editorial - Typos is the specification

[Ram Jeyaraman <Ram.Jeyaraman@microsoft.com>]

This issue is assigned the number 157. For further discussions on this issue, please refer to this issue number or use this thread.

-----Original Message-----
From: Ingo Lueck [mailto:ingo.lueck@udo.edu] 
Sent: Tuesday, May 05, 2009 8:00 AM
To: ws-dd@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [ws-dd] wsdd-dpws-1.1-spec-cd-04 typos

Hi Everyone,

there are still some typos in the "wsdd-dpws-1.1-spec-cd-04.pdf" document:

line 80:
"The XML namespace URI that MUST be used be implementations of this
specification is:"
change be to by -> ... MUST be used by implementations ...

line 86:
"Dereferencing the XML namespace defined in Section 0"
repair the reference -> ... Section 1.3

line 271 and 277 inconsistent notation:
- "property of type wsa:Reply in each"
- "property of "http://www.w3.org/2005/08/addressing/reply"in each"

line 730, 732 and 798:
"... Get Response ..."
add "Metadata" -> ... GetMetadata Response ...

line 817:
"http://schemas.xmlsoap.org/ws/2004/09/transfer/GetResponse";
change to "http://schemas.xmlsoap.org/ws/2004/09/mex/GetMetadata/Response";

line 976:
"This scope of this section is ..."
change This to The -> "The scope of this section is ..."

line 1026:
"A DEVICE MUST NOT advertise HTTP scheme addresses the xAddrs fields of
WS-Discovery"
add "in" -> "... scheme addresses in the xAddrs fields ..."

Best regards,
    Ingo




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