[no subject]

Perhaps we could add your suggested note to explain the current
situation until we actually deal with Issue i057?=20

> I would like to request the tc to give us editorial comments on the CD
candidate so that they would be caught a bit earlier.

I agree completely and will try to do this kind of review on a more
timely basis in the future. =20

Unfortunately the CD candidate review occurred while I was chairing an
all week F2F standards meeting and I did not have the time to do the
review when it as scheduled. =20

I hope you agree that this review is "better late than never".

/paulc

Paul Cotton, Microsoft Canada
17 Eleanor Drive, Nepean, Ontario K2E 6A3
Tel: (613) 225-5445 Fax: (425) 936-7329
mailto:Paul.Cotton@microsoft.com

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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Yalcinalp, Umit [mailto:umit.yalcinalp@sap.com]
> Sent: November 3, 2005 6:18 PM
> To: Paul Cotton; gilbert.pilz@bea.com; ws-rx@lists.oasis-open.org
> Subject: RE: [ws-rx] Groups - wsrmp-1.1-spec-cd--01
(wsrmp-1.1-spec-cd-
> 01.pdf) uploaded
>=20
> Paul,
>=20
> Thanks for the editorial check up.
>=20
> FYI,  there is already an issue opened with the tc on normative
> references. It is Issue i057 that corresponds to item (6) that needs
to
> be decided by the tc for both specs.
>=20
> It appears that the linking, table numbers in the CD version is broken
> from the wd, I will put a checklist for publishing so that we don't
get
> a regression for these in the future in our process.
>=20
> I would like to request the tc to give us editorial comments on the CD
> candidate so that they would be caught a bit earlier.
>=20
> Thanks.
>=20
> --umit
>=20
>=20
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Paul Cotton [mailto:Paul.Cotton@microsoft.com]
> > Sent: Thursday, Nov 03, 2005 1:56 PM
> > To: gilbert.pilz@bea.com; ws-rx@lists.oasis-open.org
> > Subject: RE: [ws-rx] Groups - wsrmp-1.1-spec-cd--01
> > (wsrmp-1.1-spec-cd-01.pdf) uploaded
> >
> > Additional editorial comments on WS-RM Policy:
> >
> > 1. Links to References:
> > The References when used appear in blue and in "[]" brackets
> > in the PDF
> > file.  Are these supposed to be hyperlinks in the PDF document?
> >
> > 2. Line 130:
> > The namespace URI has been changed but the hyperlink value does not
> > match the value that appears in the text.
> >
> > 3. Line 136:
> > The text above the table "Table Number range Table" does not
> > make sense.
> >
> > 4. Line 272:
> > The actual hyperlink value appears wrong since it ends in "=3D".
> >
> > 5. Line 347:
> > "RECOMMENED" is spelt wrong.
> >
> > 6. Line 359: 4.2 Non-Normative
> > I don't understand why all the references are in section 4.2
> > which makes
> > them all non-normative?
> >
> > 7. Line 375:
> > Should the [RM] reference be to the TC's version of
> > WS-ReliableMessaging?
> >
> > 8. Line 387:
> > The only reference with a version number in the reference label is "
> > [WSDL 1.1]".  Could this be changed to just "[WSDL]" to match
> > the style
> > used for the other references?
> >
> > 9. Line 393-394
> > Several of the XML references point to the most recent edition e.g.
> > third edition for XML 1.0.  Is there a reason why this is not done
for
> > the XML Schema references?
> >
> > 10. Line 426
> > The schema location URI has been changed but the hyperlink value
does
> > not match the value that appears in the text.
> >
> > 11. Line 426
> > I tried to fetch the schema from the revised URI at:
> > http://docs.oasis-open.org/wsrmp/200510/wsrm-policy.xsd
> > but it does not appear to be available.
> >
> > 12. Line 476 and 478
> > The namespace URIs have been changed but the hyperlink values do not
> > match the values that appears in the text.
> >
> > /paulc
> >
> > Paul Cotton, Microsoft Canada
> > 17 Eleanor Drive, Nepean, Ontario K2E 6A3
> > Tel: (613) 225-5445 Fax: (425) 936-7329
> > mailto:Paul.Cotton@microsoft.com
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> > > -----Original Message-----
> > > From: Paul Cotton [mailto:Paul.Cotton@microsoft.com]
> > > Sent: November 3, 2005 2:01 PM
> > > To: gilbert.pilz@bea.com; ws-rx@lists.oasis-open.org
> > > Subject: RE: [ws-rx] Groups - wsrmp-1.1-spec-cd--01
> > (wsrmp-1.1-spec-cd-
> > > 01.pdf) uploaded
> > >
> > > This document has many of the same Editorial problems that I
> > identified
> > > in the WS-RM document.  Can we get these editorial problems fixed?
> > >
> > > Paul Cotton, Microsoft Canada
> > > 17 Eleanor Drive, Nepean, Ontario K2E 6A3
> > > Tel: (613) 225-5445 Fax: (425) 936-7329
> > > mailto:Paul.Cotton@microsoft.com
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > > > -----Original Message-----
> > > > From: gilbert.pilz@bea.com [mailto:gilbert.pilz@bea.com]
> > > > Sent: November 3, 2005 1:51 PM
> > > > To: ws-rx@lists.oasis-open.org
> > > > Subject: [ws-rx] Groups - wsrmp-1.1-spec-cd--01
> > > (wsrmp-1.1-spec-cd-01.pdf)
> > > > uploaded
> > > >
> > > > The document named wsrmp-1.1-spec-cd--01
> > (wsrmp-1.1-spec-cd-01.pdf)
> > > has
> > > > been submitted by Gilbert Pilz to the OASIS Web Services
Reliable
> > > Exchange
> > > > (WS-RX) TC document repository.
> > > >
> > > > Document Description:
> > > > Committee Draft 01
> > > >
> > > > View Document Details:
> > > > http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ws-
> > > > rx/document.php?document_id=3D15189
> > > >
> > > > Download Document:
> > > > http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ws-
> > > > rx/download.php/15189/wsrmp-1.1-spec-cd-01.pdf
> > > >
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