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Subject: NEW ISSUE: Editorial nits for wsrm-1.1-spec-cd-01
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Title: Editorial nits for wsrm-1.1-spec-cd-01 Description: There are a number of editorial issues with the
CD document wsrm-1.1-spec-cd-01. These are described fully in the proposal
below. Justification: Self evident Target: core Proposal: Footers on every page are wrong as descriptions of fields
are present rather than contents; i.e. File name, Date, Page Page. The text
numbers of Statistics” should be deleted. Line 2: Delete the space between “Reliable” and
“Messaging”. Line 42: Table of Contents, there is no space between any of
the section numbers and the text of each section title and there should be. Line 42: Table of Contents, page numbers are wrong for
sections, i.e. Appendix F.Notices says page 54 and it is on 56. Lines 74-84: Appendix section letters have a “.”
Instead of a space between the appendix title Lines 76-80: Appendix subsections are not indented Line 119: Random bullet point after this line and before 120
(how can that be done?) Line 127: Formatting of text in table seems off,
inconsistently formatted as hyperlinks Line 141: "SectionNamespace", the section number
appears to be missing from this cross-reference and the spacing appears to be
wrong. Line 149: Blank, should just be struck. Line 154: Extra space between “accurately” and “determine” Line 157: “The” should not be capitalized. Line 247: <LastMessage> formatting of is inconsistent with
other XML elements in spec. Lines 296 and 298: <wsrm:Sequence> formatting of is inconsistent
with other XML elements in spec. Line 541: OPTIONAL at beginning of line does not belong Lines 645 and 648: <wsrm:CloseSequence> formatting of is
inconsistent with other XML elements in spec. Lines 676: <wsrm:CloseSequenceResponse> formatting of is
inconsistent with other XML elements in spec. Lines 677: <wsrm:CloseSequence> formatting of is inconsistent
with other XML elements in spec. Lines 679: <wsrm:CloseSequenceResponse> formatting of is
inconsistent with other XML elements in spec. Lines 683: <wsrm:CloseSequence> formatting of is inconsistent
with other XML elements in spec. Lines 763: <wsrm:CreateSequence> formatting of is inconsistent
with other XML elements in spec. Lines 863: <wsrm:Identifier> formatting of is inconsistent
with other XML elements in spec. Lines 948-950: Definition text is inappropriately indented Line 960: Extra space before definition term Line 964: Extra space before term and inconsistent font from
other definition terms Lines 968, 1166, 1167, 1212, 1286, 1312, 1340, 1388, 1445,
1465, 1466: The period between appendix section letter and title should be a
space. Lines 1001, 1014, 1018, 1019: Undefined namespace prefix of
ws is used, should be xs |
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