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Subject: NEW ISSUE: Editorial nits for wsrmp-1.1-spec-cd-01
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Title: Editorial nits for wsrm-1.1-spec-cd-01 Description: There are a number of editorial issues with the
CD document wsrm-1.1-spec-cd-01. These are described fully in the proposal
below. Justification: self evident Target: core Proposal: Footers on every page are wrong as descriptions of fields
are present rather than contents; i.e. File name, Date, Page Page. The text numbers
of Statistics” should be deleted. Line 2: Delete the space between “Reliable” and
“Messaging”. Line 42: Table of Contents, there is no space between any of
the section numbers and the text of each section title and there should be. Line 42: Table of Contents, page numbers are wrong for
sections, i.e. Introduction says page 4 when it is page 3. Lines 52-55: Appendix section letters have are followed by a
“.” that should not be there Line 94: "SectionNamespace", the section number
appears to be missing from this cross-reference and the spacing appears to be
wrong. Line 169: Indentation does not match other sections. Lines 280-302: Term definitions are on same line as term
rather than on following line as in the core WS-RM spec. |
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