i060: a more complete proposal

[Jacques Durand <JDurand@us.fujitsu.com>]

This proposal extends on and includes the previous one proposed by Chris: remove the expression "reliable message" and use "reliable delivery" or the like instead.

 

In wsrm specification (0.7):

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Additional updates:

 

L77 (Intro): "...for reliable message delivery." reword as "... for reliable delivery of messages".

 

L160 (Section 2, comment on Fig 1):

"Figure 1 below illustrates the entities and events in a simple reliable message exchange."

reword as:

"Figure 1 below illustrates the entities and events in a simple reliable exchange of a message."

 

L198: (Proposed by Chris)

Replace the first bullet in section 2.3 Invariants as:

The RM Source MUST assign each message to be delivered reliably a message number (defined below)

beginning at 1 and increasing by exactly 1 for each subsequent message to be delivered reliably.

 

L235: "...the intention of providing a reliable message exchange."

reword as:

"...the intention of reliably exchanging messages."

 

L448 (section 3.4) : "Messages for which the delivery assurance applies MUST contain a <wsrm:Sequence>

header block." Reword as: "Messages for which a reliable delivery is required MUST contain a

<wsrm:Sequence> header block."

(rationale: Associate more clearly the notion of "reliable delivery" with the presence of Sequence header,

now that it is the expression in use. Any reference to DAs is unnecessary here.)

 

 

In wsrmp specification (0.2):

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L95: "..to ensure reliable message delivery." --> "..to ensure reliable delivery of messages."