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Subject: New Issue: Reword the Abstract


Title: Reword the Abstract

Description:
The final sentence within the Abstract (lines 27-29 in the doc I have) 
reads rather oddly: "WS-ReliableMessaging is a building block that is used 
in conjunction with other specifications and application-specific 
protocols to accommodate a wide variety of *protocols* related to the 
operation of distributed Web services."

I don't think that the repetition of 'protocol' helps here. I find the 
sentence confusing.

Justification:
Our spec should be as easy to read as possible

Target: core
Type: editorial

Proposal:
Thanks to Anish for the following suggestion!
Replace 'protocols' with 'requirements and scenarios'
"WS-ReliableMessaging is a building block that is used in conjunction with 
other specifications and application-specific protocols to accommodate a 
wide variety of *requirements and scenarios* related to the operation of 
distributed Web services."

Related issues: 
None

Thanks,

Matt




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