NEW ISSUE: run-on sentence in sect 2

[Christopher B Ferris <chrisfer@us.ibm.com>]

Title: runon sentence in section 2

Description:

The following sentence at line of CD4
draft  is what most would consider to be a run-on sentence.

        The
WS-ReliableMessaging specification defines an interoperable protocol that
requires a Reliable
        Messaging
(RM) Source and Reliable Messaging Destination to ensure that each message
transmitted by
        the
RM Source is accepted by an RM Destination, or barring acceptance, that
an RM Source can, except
        in
the most extreme circumstances, accurately determine the disposition of
each message transmitted as
        perceived
by the RM Destination, so as to resolve any in-doubt status regarding receipt
of the messages
        transmitted.

Target: spec

Type: editorial

Proposal:

Replace the sentence starting on line
of CD4 draft with the following:

The WS-ReliableMessaging specification
defines an interoperable protocol that enables a Reliable
Messaging (RM) Source to accurately
determine the disposition of each message it transmits as
perceived by the RM Destination, so
as to allow it to resolve any in-doubt status regarding receipt of the
messages
transmitted. The protocol also enables
an RM Destination to efficiently determine which of those messages it receives
have been previously received, enabling
it to filter out duplicate message transmissions caused by the retransmission,
by the RM Source, of perceived unacknowledged
messages.. It also enables an RM Destination to deliver the messages 
it receives to the Application Destination
in the order in which they were sent by an Application Source, in the event
that they 
are received out of order.

Cheers,

Christopher Ferris
STSM, Software Group Standards Strategy
email: chrisfer@us.ibm.com
blog: http://www.ibm.com/developerworks/blogs/dw_blog.jspa?blog=440
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