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Subject: RE: WSSX TC Errata ready for public review
Hi Kelvin, Here’s the list – basically the entire set of
documents appear to be Editors Drafts and all need to be updated to note
Committee Draft status and the date of approval. Additionally, the redlined OS
versions need to clearly identify that this version is *not* the OASIS
Standard but instead OASIS Standard (incorporating Proposed Errata) –
which will change to incorporating Approved Errata post public review and TC
affirmation. WS-SecureConversation 1.
Should be identified as “Committee Draft” and show
the date of approval 2.
Filenames (in URIs) apparently reference Editors Draft (ed) –
not a problem since we don’t have any specific rules but appears to be an
oversight related to 1. Above 3.
Running footers need to be updated; page number placing
incorrectly 4.
The addition of a Conformance Section appears to result in a
substantive change. That is, if there were no conformance statements included
in the OASIS Standard, placing them in an errata places an additional burden on
use of the specification. 5.
The change to section 7.1 appears to result in a substantive
change (from SHOULD to SHOULD NOT) 6.
The redlined version is incorrectly identified as an OASIS
Standard – it should be OASIS Standard incorporating Proposed Errata –
Committee Draft and show the date of approval (1. Above) WS-SecurityPolicy 1.
Should be identified as “Committee Draft” and show
the date of approval 2.
Filenames (in URIs) apparently reference Editors Draft (ed) –
not a problem since we don’t have any specific rules but appears to be an
oversight related to 1. Above 3.
Running footers need to be updated; page number placing
incorrectly 4.
The redlined version is incorrectly identified as an OASIS
Standard – it should be OASIS Standard incorporating Proposed Errata –
Committee Draft and show the date of approval (1. Above) WS-Trust 1.
Should be identified as “Committee Draft” and show
the date of approval 2.
Filenames (in URIs)apparently reference Editors Draft (ed) –
not a problem since we don’t have any specific rules but appears to be an
oversight related to 1. Above 3.
Running footers need to be updated; page number placing
incorrectly 4.
Under “3. Normative Errors” recommend placing the
word “none” (as in WS-SecurityPolicy) 5.
The redlined version is incorrectly identified as an OASIS
Standard – it should be OASIS Standard incorporating Proposed Errata –
Committee Draft and show the date of approval (1. Above) Mary From: Kelvin Lawrence
[mailto:klawrenc@us.ibm.com]
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