Revisions to be checked into cvs

[Diane Jordan <drj@us.ibm.com>]

Hi,
The doc version of the spec at http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsbpel/download.php/21572/wsbpel-specification-public_review_draft_2.doc
includes the editing changes Mary requested
and  formatting changes that were required for the xhtml.    
We need to make sure it gets checked
into cvs with appropriate change logs.  
Anyone avialable to handle that?  
Regards, Diane
IBM  Emerging Internet Software Standards
drj@us.ibm.com
(919)254-7221 or 8-444-7221, Mobile: 919-624-5123, Fax 845-491-5709

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Jordan/Raleigh/IBM on 12/18/2006 11:51 PM -----

Diane Jordan/Raleigh/IBM@IBMUS

12/18/2006 11:18 PM

To	marypmcrae@gmail.com, tc-admin@oasis-open.org
cc	wsbpel@lists.oasis-open.org, alex.yiu@oracle.com
Subject	[wsbpel] WS BPEL 2.0 public review draft 2 - corrected

Hi Mary, 
I've corrected the points you made on the second public review draft:
1. Date - please change to 20 November 2006 (rather than 20th November)
2. File name of Word Document - please change to conform with the rest
of the package (this is the pre-existing file name)
  i.e. wsbpel-specification-public_review_draft_2.doc
3. Change running footer in Word document to indicate proper file name
4. Please remove spaces from the Word diff file name
Here are the resulting files:   
Word file of CD approved for second public review:  http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsbpel/download.php/21572/wsbpel-specification-public_review_draft_2.doc
PDF of same:  http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsbpel/download.php/21573/wsbpel-specification_public_review_draft_2.pdf
Word file of CD with differences highlighted between first and second public
review:  http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsbpel/download.php/21574/wsbpel-specification-public_review_draft_2_diff.doc
PDF of same:  http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsbpel/download.php/21575/wsbpel-specification_public_review_draft_2_diff.pdf
Zip file with the html for the latest public review draft:    http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsbpel/download.php/21571/wsbpel-specification-public_review_draft_2_files.zip

Its not clear to me that any changes are needed in the RDDL beyond the
correction to the editors list you requested.  The RDDL and the associated
url's do not have dates/versions associated with them (and I don't think
they should as they are not versions of the spec).  The history of
the specification including reviews is available in the TC archives.  If
you have specific guidance as to how the RDDL should be set up, please
let us know and we'll try to comply.  Otherwise, please let us get
started with the second public review.  This is the current RDDL:
 http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsbpel/download.php/21509/docs_wsbpel_20.zip
  
Thanks. 
Regards, Diane
IBM  Emerging Internet Software Standards
drj@us.ibm.com
(919)254-7221 or 8-444-7221, Mobile: 919-624-5123, Fax 845-491-5709