WS BPEL 2.0 public review draft 2 - corrected

[Diane Jordan <drj@us.ibm.com>]

Hi Mary,
I've corrected the points you made on
the second public review draft:
1. Date - please change to 20
November 2006 (rather than 20th November) 
2. File name of Word Document - please change to conform with the rest
of the package (this is the pre-existing file name)
   i.e. wsbpel-specification-public_review_draft_2.doc
3. Change running footer in Word document to indicate proper file name
4. Please remove spaces from the Word diff file name

Here are the resulting files:  
Word file of CD approved for second
public review:  http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsbpel/download.php/21572/wsbpel-specification-public_review_draft_2.doc
PDF of same:  http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsbpel/download.php/21573/wsbpel-specification_public_review_draft_2.pdf
Word file of CD with differences highlighted
between first and second public review:  http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsbpel/download.php/21574/wsbpel-specification-public_review_draft_2_diff.doc
PDF of same:  http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsbpel/download.php/21575/wsbpel-specification_public_review_draft_2_diff.pdf
Zip file with the html for the latest
public review draft:    http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsbpel/download.php/21571/wsbpel-specification-public_review_draft_2_files.zip

Its not clear to me that any changes
are needed in the RDDL beyond the correction to the editors list you requested.
 The RDDL and the associated url's do not have dates/versions associated
with them (and I don't think they should as they are not versions of the
spec).  The history of the specification including reviews is available
in the TC archives.  If you have specific guidance as to how the RDDL
should be set up, please let us know and we'll try to comply.  Otherwise,
please let us get started with the second public review.  This is
the current RDDL:  http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsbpel/download.php/21509/docs_wsbpel_20.zip
 
Thanks. 
Regards, Diane
IBM  Emerging Internet Software Standards
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