My credit should be the same as in the spec
Danny van der
Rijn, TIBCO Software
I'll do my substantive review later..
Diane Jordan wrote:
The team working on the primer has
decided
that its ready for review. There is a clean copy posted here:
http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsbpel/download.php/23470/wsbpel-primer-draft_April_11.doc
and one with the latest set of
changes
marked here: http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsbpel/download.php/23471/wsbpel-primer-draft_April_11_diff.doc
The following are known work items
that
are in process of being addressed:
- Chapter 7 may contain too much
information
about the constructs rather than the application. An attempt was
been made to cut out as much descriptive material as seemed
appropriate.
Alex and Charlton will review together and see if more can be done.
- Also in chapter 7, should the
entire
process be discussed. Charlton will work on this while the initial
review is going on.
- Chapter 3 should be moved to
become
section 7.1.
- Section 7.1.2.4 is not
completed yet
- Section 6.2.3 (Abstract
process profile
for templates) should have a sentence added saying there's an example
in
the spec.
- We need to verify that no
internal cross
references are broken by the changes in sections.
Please provide your comments by
email.
We'll plan to discuss any comments on the TC call next Wed, April
18.
You will also be getting an FAQ
document
John is preparing for review by the TC. This is separate from the
primer.
Regards, Diane
IBM Emerging Internet Software Standards
drj@us.ibm.com
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