today's changes to primer

[Diane Jordan <drj@us.ibm.com>]

Comments on primer:  

• Section 3.1

From

Abstract Processes describe a subset of a complete process behavior. The subset behavior

To

Abstract processes describe process behavior partially without covering every detail of execution. That behavior

• Move section 2.3 to new section 7.  

• Change to 2.1 goals -    

The
WS-BPEL 2.0 effort began with a set of design goals in mind, that helped
serve as an initial scope to the specification work. Goals included the
definition of Web service orchestration concepts and enabling limited data
manipulation. These initial design goals may be found at xxxx.
m2: c/their/the specification
http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/3249/Original%20Design%20Goals%20for%20the%20BPEL4WS%20Specification.doc)

• Appendix A - Remove headings for normative and non-normative - make one list.    

Regards, Diane
IBM  Emerging Internet Software Standards
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