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Subject: RE: [wsdm] Groups - wd-wsdm-muws-part1-1.0-20041118.doc uploaded
Great comments, Mark. Looks much better now. [resource-type-specific] I think it was actually better as [resource-specific]. Avoids introduction of unnecessary concepts early on. That is, if printer management is printer-specific or printer-type-specific, I don't know... Good that you noticed: in 5.3.1 a [manageability representation]. Where did that come from? We have never defined one in the architecture or terminology sections. I agree that this should be implementation of a manageable resource as your comment says. -- Igor Sedukhin .. (igor.sedukhin@ca.com) -- (631) 342-4325 .. 1 CA Plaza, Islandia, NY 11749 -----Original Message----- From: Mark Ellison [mailto:ellison@ieee.org] Sent: Monday, November 22, 2004 9:06 PM To: vbp@hp.com Cc: Wsdm (E-mail) Subject: Re: [wsdm] Groups - wd-wsdm-muws-part1-1.0-20041118.doc uploaded Hi William, Here are my editoral comments for MUWS-part1. Hopefully, I'll work through part two by this time tomorrow... Regards, Mark vbp@hp.com wrote: >The document wd-wsdm-muws-part1-1.0-20041118.doc has been submitted by William Vambenepe (vbp@hp.com) to the OASIS Web Services Distributed Management (WSDM) TC document repository. > >Document Description: >Part 1 has a complete draft with no pending AI or TODO. Thanks for reviewing. > >Download Document: >http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsdm/download.php/10177/wd >-wsdm-muws-part1-1.0-20041118.doc > >View Document Details: >http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsdm/document.php?document >_id=10177 > > >PLEASE NOTE: If the above links do not work for you, your email >application may be breaking the link into two pieces. You may be able >to copy and paste the entire link address into the address field of your web browser. > > > >To unsubscribe from this mailing list (and be removed from the roster of the OASIS TC), go to http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/wsdm/members/leave_workgrou p.php. > > > >
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